Tourism is the back bones of the economy in Egypt. Tourism
is an important source of national income. Egypt , for us, is one of the
countries which is famous for its tourism. Tourism provide jobs for young
people. Tourism solves the problem of unemployment in Egypt. Egyptian
must behave nicely with tourists. The government should make a new programme to
teach people how to look after the monuments in Egypt and how to behave right with
tourists . The (people who not looking after the monuments and behave cruelty
with tourists must be fined at once . Types of tourism in Egypt are
Religious tourism, medical tourism , local tourism ,........etc . Tourists come
to Egypt to sightsee the
monuments such as Pyramids, Egyptian museums, Cairo
tower, Mosque of Muhammed Ali and Elephantine
Island. Tourists go to Alex ,Matrouh and the North Coast
in summer. They go to Sharm Elsheikh and Hurghada in winter. The streets and
roads are big and clean. Hotels are a lot in Egypt. The weather in Egypt is
moderate .Luxor has 1/3 the monuments of the World .Eventually we as the
Egyptian should look after the monuments and streets. We are really proud of Egypt.
Very good, ahmed. Indent your paragraph and consider the following:
ReplyDeleteIn line 1, we say "backbone" not "backbones"
In line 11 and 12 , Pyramids, Egyptian museums, Cairo tower,
These words should be preceded by the word "the".